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I wanted to update the original file, but I guess DA won't let you change videos. : Hrm... Anyway! I've tweaked a few shots and I think the story makes more sense and has a better ending now.

Thank you, everyone, for the previous feedback! It was really helpful. I'm definitely still open to crits, but I consider this mostly finished, even with the inconsistent visual "styles". In other words, I appreciate feedback on the story, pacing, and composition, but I don't plan on shading the second part, as I don't think doing so contributes to the actual story.

Thanks. :)

First draft: [link]
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Krysiis Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
That was the best
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Wolgron Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
Lmao, this was adorable.
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I-wish-I-was-a-seiyu Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student General Artist
It's cute! If you ever need voices, I'd be happy to help!
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Airon35TX Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very interesting!
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TheSpaceJumper Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AWESOME!
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starling16 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amusing, and with a different kind of ending :) Also the style goes well. After my brain got over the jump of shaded to not, it didn't mind lol.
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chunjihuli Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student
how cool c:
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greymuzzles Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just have to say that I love the idea and execution of this. In fact, my only real 'criticism' would be the fact that it isn't a full animation, and that comes only from a desire to see how good it would be
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VickeyTheWolf Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very very very EPIC :iconepicclapplz:
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MoonLightRose17 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student Filmographer
that was such a cute story :heart: I love how the fox was so picky about what eggs to eat XD and the chicken was so nice to give him the eggs at the end, and like she said it's not like chicks were going to come out of those eggs anyway.
very nice! :clap:
if you don't mind me asking: will you animate this? 'cause it's just such a nice little story >w<
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