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I wanted to update the original file, but I guess DA won't let you change videos. : Hrm... Anyway! I've tweaked a few shots and I think the story makes more sense and has a better ending now.

Thank you, everyone, for the previous feedback! It was really helpful. I'm definitely still open to crits, but I consider this mostly finished, even with the inconsistent visual "styles". In other words, I appreciate feedback on the story, pacing, and composition, but I don't plan on shading the second part, as I don't think doing so contributes to the actual story.

Thanks. :)

First draft: [link]
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Nightflare5 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was awesome :3
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Krysiis Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That was the best
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Wolgron Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
Lmao, this was adorable.
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I-wish-I-was-a-seiyu Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student General Artist
It's cute! If you ever need voices, I'd be happy to help!
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Airon35TX Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very interesting!
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TheSpaceJumper Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AWESOME!
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starling16 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amusing, and with a different kind of ending :) Also the style goes well. After my brain got over the jump of shaded to not, it didn't mind lol.
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chunjihuli Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist
how cool c:
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greymuzzles Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just have to say that I love the idea and execution of this. In fact, my only real 'criticism' would be the fact that it isn't a full animation, and that comes only from a desire to see how good it would be
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VickeyTheWolf Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very very very EPIC :iconepicclapplz:
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